I decided to give spoken word a try. Tomorrow I will upload the actual audio sample of my piece entitled: You Had me at Hello. A special kudos to blogger Azre, whose post “My Favorite” inspired me.
You. You had me at hello. Those quick words you uttered when you opened your mouth, rather, you had me at your smile. I can see you wining and dining me, taking me on long car rides and oh how about them eyes, you had me when you said hello. The word came out of your mouth as easy as A’s are to a genius, you quickly had my attention, you grabbed me before I even mentioned. Before I even said my name or God’s in vain, because when I saw you I was at a stand-still. Something sacred appeared, and it had to have been you.
You had me at hello. I didn’t want to hear the words ‘good bye.’ I wanted to wrap you in my arms and never let go – lets kiss until the sunrise, hold me through the winter-time, keep me warm let’s cuddle, let’s make love under the moonlight. Let’s enjoy the weather together, throw a snowball, I’ll throw mine – right towards you, because I adore you. What’s mine is yours and what’s yours is mine and I want to be around you all the time, let nothing come in between us because you are righteous, you are mighty, you are ‘oh my god, is he real,’ I think I just fell in love, I think I found my one.
You had me at hello, the soft opening of your lips, closing-in those perfect white teeth and that smile that made me smile, that tongue that pierced my soul, which forced me to feel like ‘I’ll never let you go.’ All you had to do is say one word and I was yours and as simple as that is – it is, and it will always be, for I am your queen, please be my king. Please walk with me and talk with me, please laugh with me and cry with me, please touch me and hold, mold me baby and show me, exactly what it is you have in store. For when you said hello I knew this had to be real, and real is where I want to be, if it’s with you then that’s where I will be.
Don’t say goodbye, don’t ever walk out of my life, for you are the one who shall hold my hand, dance with me and prance with me, sing with me and cheer with me, your favorite team – oh now that’s mine, your favorite drink – so now mine is wine. Oh those are your friends, I can surely deal with them, as long as you come in the picture I am cool with them, I am cool with her, I am cool with him, as long as you are mine, I am mighty fine.
So let’s make this simple, let’s make a toast, to the one that I love, the one I love the most, I love you, and that’s plain you see – the moment you said hello I began living out my dreams. Cliché it seems but truth be told, you are the one I love the most.
© 2011 Ivanna M. Elliott
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